A Storm Untamed

 

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These zephyr winds that wait for thunder

that rumble deep where passion lives

in storms that cannot yield as under

the silk of sheets, these winds they give

you every breath and every heartbeat

quickly to rise, surrounding you

with an embrace both wild and sweet… 

you cannot tame what these winds do

 

Gather these winds with the passion of

a storm untamed, for you my love

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Author's Note

Art ~ Arthur Braginsky
Poetry ~ MsJewel

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' .. in storms that cannot yield as under ~ the silk of sheets.. .. ' Those zephyr winds have much to answer to! Some would ask for more of that sweet two-worded phrase!

As to your chosen illustration, it leads the way, es complimenting the passion of your words, each and every one.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely review :) Julie

[Pete]

could feel those winds sweeping with passion, drawing in and wanting more. a quick hitting write wielding power. the art married perfectly to the words. you tease to the very brink leaving just enough to imagination to finish. to say it is effective would be an understatement. left me begging for a windy day. Lol

[MsJewel]

Your comments always leave me with a smile Pete. Thanks so much :)_ Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Poet.
"every heartbeat
quickly to rise, surrounding you
with an embrace both wild and sweet…
you cannot tame what these winds do"
The above lines are true. When love come alive. Cannot be stopped. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you my dear friend :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved this poem and you are welcome Julie.

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmtame the winds and get the prize ;) sometimes the thunder here rumbles for what seems like hours ..i will not think of it the same way again .. i like the idea that it is nudging and awakening passion up and down the hollers ... bursting in lightning on the hills .. try reading " A Storm Untamed" but leaving off the first word of the lines 2-5 ... tell me what you think!
E.

[MsJewel]

I like the way it reads, but then the syllable count for the sonnet is off....I'm going to have to work on it a bit. Thanks so much for the suggestion. :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ................. we are supposed to get rain today .. most likely thunder along with it ;)

[Bec]

'Silk of sheets,' beautifully crafted alliteration.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie