Found

~ a love poem ~

photograph compliments of pinterest

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Rivers flow, oceans rise

behind the stars in his eyes

I’ve counted each one you see

bathed in reveries

of satin tides, waves of silk,

moonlight pale as milk

Drifting gently to the sound

of his heartbeat….

 

I am found

~~~

Reviews

[Alessander]

This is very smooth. The rhythm, the imagery, almost feels like the waves crashing and receding, or like a faint murmur on the ear.

"moonlight pale as milk" fav line.

Great ending too

"I am found"

Sudden. Almost like waking up from a reverie .

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Luissanto]

Very beautifully written...
A great read which reaches you in the depths of your soul. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Thank you for sharing.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your generous review. :) Julie

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

What a wonderful feeling to have been found- safe and sound- where we all would love to be- love it🌹

[BlackPrince]

This poem celebrates love and affirms it with contentment.

[Sudeep Mishra]

Every piece of your's, you always get the feel and the flow bang on. Sweet, precise and colossally relative.

[Rossen]

Softly strummed
or whispered gently
I fell into the rhythm...
I would love to hear you
read this ...
you have such a delicate
touch....100/100

[KCthelastboyscout]

You have to feel the euphoria of ecstasy to write this in just a few words.to feel the grace of love is a rare thing these days.thank you for sharing your heart with us.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[BBP]

Gorgeous write. The words flowed like silk!

[Ashwin Shanker]

Sensuous, metaphorical and deeply romantic.
It is passionate and also well-presented. Love the Font used.