Let it Snow

~~~

As stars that shine on winter nights

are to the moon's beauty

when snowflakes whisper in the wind

so was his love to me

 

And still he shines deep in my heart

and whispers in the glow

of winter nights and pale moons

Please love…let it snow 

Reviews

[Desert Knave]

The imagery and emotion behind it both stand out. ~Jim

[Michael Sun Bear]

A beautiful poem AND beautiful photo. This is the very first piece of yours I have read, and be assured I like this so much, I will explore more of your work. Michael Sun Bear

[Einstein Noodle]

awwww such a love eh!? ... fortunate to share in such a thing says i! .. i appreciate the use of cold and snow to create such a warm glow ... so sublime!
E.

[emmajoygreen]

'And still he shines deep in my heart
and whispers in the glow'
of winter nights and pale moons
'Please love…let it snow '

When all is seemingly gone, finished, over: when everything has faded into nothing, this is must surely feel but feed the heart and spirit. Whatever- may the snow prove the warmth of your love.

Stanzas perfectly laid, emotions public but preciously yours. Image a perfect addition.

[MCS]

Lovely read, deeply felt words.

[TeresaMorgan_]

The poem beautifully captures the quiet, enduring nature of love through winter imagery, evoking both warmth and longing. Its simplicity and delicate metaphors create a tender, nostalgic atmosphere.

[Amy R]

A very beautiful poem that shines of love and affection.
The choice of winter imagery suggests a great sense of calm and reflection.
Snowflakes are described as whispering in the wind, giving them a gentle and soft quality that enhances your poem's romantic tone.
Thanks for sharing such a lovely piece.
-Amy

[Trace]

Let it snow indeed, love the whispers of snowflakes.
This poem reminds me .....
Of...... um...
Me.

Very nice, love your poetry ❤️

Huggs, T.

[Marie]

Your words drift slowly down the page as snowflakes drift from the sky above, in this very beautifully penned poem which speaks to me of past love. Beautiful winter depiction! Thank you for sharing, Julie...

[redzone]

a deep love and a longing are heard in those snow whispers. What a wonderful way to express his gentle touch on your heart making it "glow".
-Curt