Soul

Lead me, o soul

unto the unknown, uncommon

journey of my spirit.

Where to next?

Will I return to this place called earth?

Will I become an Angel?

Watching over humans

with their hearts, minds and spirits.

Believing they are indestructable

yet suffer....

Lead me, o soul

unto the unknown, uncommon

journey of my spirit....

Reviews

[Lucia]

This is very beautiful and good! I really like it!

Also, if you get the chance? Mind reviewing my short story? Thanks!

[Scott Metro]

Asking for a quest...a spiritual need.
Easy read.
Enjoyed it.
Scott

[Dave]

I like the demeanor of this poem.
I just feel you minimised its potential. It's a wonderful piece, and I think you should consider expanding it.