Heavens Blue

A Poem by JustJulie

Look at the joy that heavens bring
So many birds red, yellow, green and blue.
Painting the sky with feathered wings
Till it glows up with multi hues.
But I love the little bird that sings
The plump and brown cuckoo.

© 2024 JustJulie

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Ken Simm.

Excellent I love this as both an ornithologist and an artist.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 Year Ago

Wow. Thank you.

Jeyanthi

Lovely write...
It reminds us start the day afresh leave behind the worries and heading..
The plum colored eye cuckoo sings... but we doesn't know it's joy or melancholy but still singing...
Ha.. I see mocking birds often near home they do mocking, it's fun to listen...
My baby imitates whenever she hears the crow's kakaaaa.. 😅
I never seen red one... but more of brown grey ... occasionally blue and green ..
Happy writings...:)

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 Year Ago

Thank you :)

Ern M. Yoshimoto

i loved this ode to birds. the way they add so much texture to any scene can not be stated enough. these majestic creatures are heightened to artistic peaks in this short piece. it gave me a flutter in my chest. i adore birds and all we get are pigeons here, but i am still happy whenever i come across one. one day i'd like to visit this place where birds red, yellow, green and blue paint the sky with feathered wings.'

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 Year Ago

Wowee Thank you!

DIVYA

A simple and sweet tribute to the skies with a great message in it. I liked this poem so much.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 Year Ago

Thank you!

Coyote Poetry

I did like the poetry Julie. I have two bird feeders. Every morning. They sing to me in thankfulness and i appreciate. Amazing and beautiful movement of words and thoughts.
Coyote