Blurrr

idk...

Everything you saw

You may have thought it was real,

But was it really?

Take another look.

Look close,

You may realize that after getting a good look,

It was fake.

You thought it was love,

But it was fake.

After your second look

You say to yourself,

Why would I have ever thought?

Because the big thing that you think of as "love"

Is really just a blur.

Author's Note

Ah i wrote this a long time ago when I was mad at somebody because they---Nevermind

Reviews

[Brighid an Lasair]

Great write! People tend to forget that when you allow yourself to be consumed by someone, you fail to see things for what they are. Love truly IS blind, only when you love someone completely can you overlook their negative aspects without question.

[Theresa]

It's a blur because love makes you blind. You see what you want to see. Feel what you want to feel and you ignore all the obvious signs that it might not be what's right for you. You sum that up perfectly. I also like the format. Nicely done.

[Jane Doe]

i likkkiiieeee its wonderful for a newbie HAHAHAH NO JK its good for anyrank newbie or not
luv it
luv ya
-wifey:P
100/100

[Holly O'Brien]

Very well put!! It really is all a big blur when it's over and done with...sheesh...but like I said well put!! Bravo!!

it all comes down to trust.