Ubiquitous

Here and there

There and here

Left to right

North and south

Heaven and hell

Fictious and reality

 

I am not here but there, Not seen but heard

Your eyes are shut but im awake

 

Like a needle in a haystack, forever in limbo

I sit  bare skin breathless watching Night and Day

 

An eagle can fly as high as it wants

be anywhere it wants

do what ever it wants

 

But we are forever preach on freedom

yet most are bound like ankors in deep waters

 

I long to be Ubiquitous ; I long to be free.

 

 

"Dream as if  You'll live forever, live as if you'll die today" -James Dean

 

  

Reviews

[Steve]

Nice!! I really like the last line the best! So true isnt it?

[Jonathan De Elvira]

this was good poem..
but it can be greater if u added up more "freedom craving" element...
like when "But we are forever preach on freedom
yet most are bound like ankors in deep waters" sentence, u cn put on a few more detail n put some example of that sentences...

no biggy, u have a good idea, creative mind u have...
I know ur a good writer, just don't hold back, threw ur creativity more...
I like it nonetheless :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

First of all...I love this poem, but think this it will never live up to its full potential on paper. It filled my room with the smell of Sinister Riffage driven by a Flat Five. It would make an AWESOME song! The tension and lack of resolution the Tritone provides will make this poem absolutely hypnotic. I love the way you made me feel as if I was trapped and lost...knowing how to get out...but having no means to do so. I Loveeeeeeee this poem. You have a hit.

[TAO]

Allow me to second with I.L.K.R.^^since 1994 (gees) said... Very well done. This makes think of the freedom of...being...in limbo, in between all and nothing... Your poem is a reminder to me that We Are... Yin Yang; striking in its balance, very much worth the read.

[GrownUpTime]

really good poem. i like youre style.

[DamienHino]

"Like a needle in a haystack, forever in limbo
I sit bare skin breathless watching Night and Day
An eagle can fly as high as it wants
be anywhere it wants
do what ever it wants"
Very creative, the entire poem thanks for sharing!