Apollonian

I love the sound of nothing

I am nothing but calmness

sitting in quite

there is no noise around me

but as it appears theres noise in my head

Im thinking

thinking of everything, but not makeing a peep

its strange how one can be so quite but in there mind is like a

raving jungle, heards of wild animals

I sit in the pleasureable sound of nothing but the wind

I wonder if i'll ever wake up from this relaxing trance

I Dont want too but reality is drawing near.

Author's Note

feel free to judge :)

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Silence can do strange things to the mind and human psyche causing the imagination to run wild, it can be good or bad depending on the state you are in... I can relat eto this piece.

[Aven]

I love sitting in the quiet, it is the only way to really perceive life.

[GrownUpTime]

it so chill. makes me want to dream. i love the way you made it loud but soundless...

[Frantzuu]

I like this poem, the concept is great. It's peaceful, and makes you wonder about the beauty of the world, and makes you wonder about what is beyond the blue sky. Stunning piece of writing. :D

[TAO]

Reality is what you make it, though. It takes the will of a conscious observer, I think. I like where this leads. Makes me want to lay out and just stare at the sky forever. nice job.