Dark Eyes

What hides behind these dark eyes? Such a thing that you'll never know.

No one really knows
this girl

With those
dark eyes

They have seen death
known pain

They've seen many tears
falling

They've witnessed hate
and lies

But they've been with
happiness

And been in
love

They're hidden with a veil
of hair

You will never know
this girl

With those
dark eyes

 

Author's Note

Be harsh.

Reviews

[Skye Manson]

There is no reason for me to be harsh. I thought it was good. I know some people who could possibly fit her profile. Well done.

[dougspoetry]

Very well constructed poem, the imagery is great, truly heartfelt. Keep up the great work.

God Bless!