Arrested

Couplet

Arrested by her eyes

Caught me slipping by surprise

Found my heart on patrol

booked , never coming home

Guilty of the crime

Gazing from her thighs to her eyes

Love the color of her lips

And the danger of her hips

i'd be shot if i resisted

So i gave like Christmas

Soul enslaved by a mistress

new law is her intentions

Author's Note

Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Patricia B. Hepler]

'Love the color of her lips
And the danger of her hips'

Great read; love the quoted verse! pat

[Androglossia]

Oh, the act of falling in love and getting.. . laid? Oooppss.. I like tha way you convey the explicit into a wholesome poetry, keeping it more positive and cute:) This is nicely penned.

[Irene]

"Arrested by her eyes" so much in that one sentence. Love it!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

"Found my heart on patrol
booked, never coming home" are my favorite two lines! This is indeed a well-written poem and was interesting to read. :)
Amazing!


Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

[Gothic Girl]

"Love the color of her lips

And the danger of her hips"

-I love these lines. you somehow portrayed a very seductive woman. powerful descriptions indeed.

[Yheela]

With a law like love, there's no escaping.