times a wastin while i sit here thinking about who discovered milk

the past is the past

the present is the present

the future is unforeseeable

the past is impossible to change

and the future is impossible to see

so f****n live it up while you're in the present

f**k f**k f**k

the seconds you did that thing you just did are gone

now they're the past

f****n hurry up dude

time's a wastin

up n at em

do some cool s**t while you're here my friend

Reviews

[FlatDaddy]

Well, Jordan, You had your choice of writing this on a site where hopeful writers come to learn and practice their chosen craft; OR you could have written this on the wall of the boys bathroom at school. Where do you really want to write? One of them takes more time and talent than you are showing here. Would you like to try again?

[Jordan Varner]

Hi, there! I understand that putting other people down may make you feel like a very big person, but this little piece of writing is actually from 9 years ago and was written when i was a teenager, still getting my bearings on writing in my high school creative writing class! I'm not even sure how you found this since it is so old, and I don't even use this site anymore, but I've spent a lot of time changing up my writing style, though I rarely write anymore. I understand that this writing was not good, but again, I was a teenager. You are a grown man writing hateful, arrogant comments on a nearly 10 years old piece on the internet. So which of us sounds like a boys bathroom? Hope you have a wonderful night and find peace and love rather than needless arrogance and spite.