My Messengers

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I sit up at night,
seeing the stars shining bright.
As I look I wonder if you see them too…
like bright little wishes shiny and new.
Look at those stars so bright.

I sit during the day,
listening to what everything has to say.
As I listen, I wonder if you hear…
the promises I make to you my dear.
Listen to what the stars say.

I sleep so sound,
dreaming of the day you’ll be around.
As I dream of us evermore…
my dreams walking through an invisible door.
Dream about what the stars show.

I will use those stars as a boat,
my words will reach you despite this moat.
You will somehow know I write this, for the stars will tell you…
for it is what I ask them to do.
The Stars Will Be My Messengers to You.

Author's Note

I'm tired and bored...don't judge it to harshly

Reviews

[barricade]

you wrote such a beauty while being tired and bored...!!! you my dear are an artist...painted the canvas with your words so beautifully...a true poet...cos i love what you've done here...so innocent, so pure...straight from the heart...seems you're totally in love...lost in the thoughts of your darling...

can't pick out a particular part here...cos i love it in it's entirety...each word fits perfectly making the overall picture look so gorgeous...can completely relate to it, word by word...that adds to the magic for me...

thank you so much for sharing...great work dear friend... (hope i wasn't too harsh...lol....)

love
barricade...

[Servant Ties]

yes, I agree. Such beauty in your words. Actually in all of your works there is beauty in them. I am glad to have the chhance to have read some of your work. ^_^

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I love it..its wonderful
Great job