Follow the Words

 

I hear it softly

My Voice is shaky

My heart scared

My mind reeling.

I can’t focus, can’t breathe

My hope is dying

I need someone

To catch me,

Hold me.

I look,

And I’m alone.

Standing completely alone.

 

I hear it softly,

I follow the words to the song

My voice is shaky

My heart scared

My mind reeling

I focus on the words

I cling for my life

They’re my only source of strength

My only source of hope.

 

Reviews

[Rion]

:O I like it.
There's nothing you can really...make better, i feel that the way you have it now is the best it could possibly be.
Keep up the good work.
Rion
(soz for the weak review...i'm hungry :P)