Mapping Me

I'm young and inexperinced,
It all makes me shy,
The good girl in me
Wants to hold back,
I'm trusting you,
Letting you in,
Show me,
Teach me
The sensations I've never felt.

Trace your finger tips along my skin,
The curves of my body,
Every freckle,
Every ticklish spot
That makes me squirm and giggle.
Every scar,
The ones on my heart,
And the ones shown on my skin.
You outline them,
Curious to know
The story behind each.
Your lips move softly against my skin
Sending shivers up my spine.
Gentle and sweet you connect it all,
With light trace marks
Your finger tips
Map the way into my heart.

Reviews

[Prudence Desideria]

sweet, innocent, mature, honest... the words that come to mind when reading this. Lovely write! It's very balanced in a sense, bordering on a lot of lines. Plus the very special feeling towards the end, the stories and the hopefulness for magic, understanding, etc.

I hope any of that made sense, I blame the heat if it didn't. All in all good write! Seemed to come from the heart.

[Mistral Bilgera]

i love the elements of shyness and boldness you've incorporate in this poem, and the elements of
Lust- love.... it's amost an erotica good work.

[woodennymph]

it's a nice poem but you might want to change the audience to mature just in case due to the content. it is simple, short and sweet, nice details and nice choice of words. i like it.:)