Midday moon

Midday moon
Come to soon
I fight so hard
To run

Nightlight gloom
No more room
Why can’t I see
The sun

Carelessness a piece
Of our jigsaw soul
Murder on the street
A norm often told

River of blood
No one sees
Burns foundations
Shakes the knees

Moonlight fire
Melt the brain
Murdering liars
Delivering pain

Provoked I find
The good man
I regret my kind
Bloody hand

Midday moon
Come to soon
I fight so hard
No more

Reviews

[Adora.xo]

Nice. I loved the first to stanzas, the rhyme scheme was unique, and it all flowed well together. Great imagery as well. It plays almost like a story in my head for some reason.

~Adora

[Starting Over]

I loved it!! You did a great job! :)

[chaotic katie]

amazing imagry this is a fantastic peice great job

[NinjaPi]

Nice poem with great imagery. This feels to me like a poem about being angery at the destruction of live and your hate for your part in it. Very interseting

[Zachary_James]

Amazing job

beautiful imigary, liked it, i know what u mean
[luvs]
-kristi