Sun and white cloud

Sometimes in the winter, the sun gets blocked by a white cloud

you cant see the

sun very good

it is there

but it is blocked

by white cloud

it looks like it

is touching

the mountain

the snow is really

popping out

on the mountains

it is winter

for sure

the sun is still

bright

even though it

isn't giving off

any heat

it is still there

Reviews

[Diane]

I liked the poem. Isn't it crazy that so many people can write about the sun and the moon and there will be so much more to say about it, that the subject never fully gets covered.

[Rye]

The sun is always there, nicely written.

[Justin]

thanks :) :) it was actually awesome the placement of the sun, how it touches the mountains!!