Demon Dreams

I feel like I'm being stalked,
 I feel like I'm being watched,
 I feel like these demons are after me again.
 NO! I won't commit another sin,
 cause I'm tired of doing it, tired of pulling it.
 wakeing up in the middle of the night
 with a cold sweat filled "homey" at their feet.

 I SEE DEMONDS NOW!!!
 I'M falling apart
 cause their scratching and stabing at my heart.
 I'm fighting back, but I feel my body begin to lean....I wake up.

................I was all just a dream.

Reviews

[Voice11]

WoW I've written so many poems about demons and I can say this is honestly very discriptive. You do have some grammar work but even so this is really a fantastic poem!

[Havatara]

I loved the poem itself, but you need to do some grammar working. Like in the last line. And second stanza third line. =) Other than that I loved it!

[Morning]

This is GREAT!!!!!!
Sometimes things like that can feel so real!
I love it!

my story is about a girl who was born a demon maybe you should check it out ;]]

[Tori]

Freakin sweet. I sometimes feel like i'm being watched, as if there is a demon out there, watching...ready to drag me back down into my own personal hell. Very very good! KEEP WRITING!!!