Waiting

Wanting,
lusting,
to be held,
to be loved,
to feel warmth,
to feel your beating heart.
Wanting to be sheltered from the cold,
heartless winds.
Falling into invisible arms;
into an abyss of love.
Wishing,
hoping,
that my desires will be filled;
my desires of loving warmth.
Wanting to be held,
comforted,
loved.
Dreaming of passionate embraces,
of tender kisses,
loving words,
romantic nights.
Waiting for undying love.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Who doesn't want love in this world.. even the toughest and meanest people on this earth have someone they love deep inside.. this beautiful writing contains the yearning for that undying soulmate. The true quest of every heart on this planet at some point.. although some do give up looking. Hope you find what you are looking for.. and if you should find it that you give it everything you have in you! =)

[Voice11]

This is honestly one of your greatest works! and hay you never told me about this one! lol But it is awesome, everything about it is completely awesome!

[Butterflymom]

This is nicely done.

[Rachel Koepke]

wow this was a great poem. I recently had a love poem contest and you should have entered I would have probably given this one a prize. i may have another so you may want to look into it

[Tori]

Very good. I think we all feel like that sometimes, we want someone to love us, and we wnat to love them...very good! Great job! It's absolutley amazing.