Snow War

Poem

There is already enough snow on the ground that refuses to leave until the rest of it's troop decides to fall gently on the ground on whatever territory is still wide and open, until eventually they all slip away into a water stream promising to return.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

I really like the imagery and symbology used in this piece. I don't think I would call it a poem per-say, but more like a two line verse, or a wise statement.
I think if it were broken into 4 lines...then it would be like a shakespearian stanza or such.
One suggestion I might make is in regards of the word "Ground" used twice. I think the piece would improve with anothe word for ground in the second postition.

Over all a really beautiful vision of snow and it's role in our lands

Aaron Maycroft

[Linda Stinson]

Cycle of life, well, this could be the cyle of nature, the duration as long as the world turns. I guess it depends on how you look at the snow. Some people love the snow, you know? So bring it on! Welcome to the cafe, looking forward to enjoying and sharing time and space with you.