Today

Sugar sweetened sickness,
And prescribed perception purification.
Kaleidoscope cardboard cartons
Fling fast food frailty.

A reimagined reality,
Freed from freedom,
Graciously given imprisonment
And thankful for it.

Ingenious in convenience.
Naturally nullified.
Razed and rebuilt
Into no one's image.

Reviews

[Tiffany Boles]

I love the message in this one, I agree so much. Great choice of words and rhythm. It's wonderfully written :)

[Al R. Arce]

Love the game of words! Very cool!

[Strider Marcus Jones]

Consumerism is freedom for some and oppression for others. 100/100

[Sami Khalil]

"A reimagined reality,
Freed from freedom,
Graciously given imprisonment
And thankful for it. "

Your poetry is great...Thank you for penning...:)

[Jwakefield]

Thank you again for all your encouragement. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Hmmm.....tried to follow this one a couple times. Freedom is really imprisionment? Not sure what you are getting at. I liked your vocabulary though. Lydi*

[Jwakefield]

Just kind of a comment on the world we live in. We have so much convenience and freedom, but in a lot of ways we're more rooted in place than ever. Thanks for your comments.

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, now I understand. Thank you. Lydi*