The Impatient Unemployed

Waiting can be painful, but impatience never pays!

Don't make me wait
Have you no mercy?
You are eating into my life
Have you no consideration?
Who gives you rights?
Don't make me count the minutes
I will surely miss a beat
Don't make me seeth in anger
Don't make me grind my teeth
I hate sitting on the edge of my seat
Waiting for my name to be called
I hate biting my lips in anticipation
I hate to be in this state of appall
I'm my time's master
And I will spare none for you
Why make me wait
When you have nothing to do?
So I'm leaving now
I'll never come back again
You can sit and wait for me forever
Then you will understand my pain....hmmph!

So saying, off she went!! impatient and yet still unemployed!!

Reviews

[MJMaramba]

I know how it feels too. Waiting for nothing and also rejection is my most fears but it doesn't mean to stop trying. There is also Hope. ^_^ Good Poem!

[Crazy Cat Man]

i love this poem and understand the feeling of being anxious. it can drive you crazy!!!! bravo

[RAWR!]

there is that cleverness again.

"I will surely miss a beat
Don't make me seeth in anger
Don't make me grind my teeth
I hate sitting on the edge of my seat
Waiting for my name to be called
I hate biting my lips in anticipation
I hate to be in this state of appall
I'm my time's master
And I will spare none for you
Why make me wait
When you have nothing to do?"

and that funny "hmmph"

a few breakups in the flow, but i think you have a interesting way of portraying life.
i cant do that, write about life, i just fail when i try.
so well done.

[Not Afraid of Bruises]

There are some really good images in here. Well written.