The Breeze

She shivered with envy

when the breeze touched his naked skin..

He got Goosebumps

seeing her quiver in the rain.

Author's Note

Thank you for your time!

Reviews

[StimulateyourCreativity]

I felt it myself, nice job!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you! This encourages a lot.

[An owl on the moon]

You make words dance to life through the cold breeze and envy's ever-reaching grasp. So well done.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Awe! Thank you so much!

[Indra Neil]

Intense imagery in this fine brevity! Well done!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you..!

[Indra Neil]

u r welcome!

[Gaurav Bhattacharya]

Ohhh really you are a romantic personality, no doubt

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Awesome..........
i absolutely loved it!!!
:)
you should try senryus/haikus..........go here:
http://www.howmanysyllables.com/poetry/haiku

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Okay Sure thing!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

all the best!!! :) :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you!