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My nape just itched,

I turned around.

Found him staring,

goofy-dumb as a hound.

I pretended to look bored,

gave a frown,

He knew it well by now,

smiled up till his crown.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. You create good place and situation. I did like the ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Gee]

Ah,a school boy crush,crushed.Sweet

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you!

[Perkele.7885]

You have an admirer er! I just do not understand why that could be? my goodness lol

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you. :)

[Perkele.7885]

I cannot blame the boy. He has good taste in women folk! Heaven forbid, if you ever dropped a book and he picked it up for you, Oh gosh, Gee!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Very imaginative! Then I will try not to ever drop anything! lol

[dexterous sam]

this is what happened when you caught red handed when you are watching someone doing the same

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Haha! Lol!

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i was the hound looking at a girl in my first year college English class...she became the muse for many early poems and the girl in my dreams for years, though she never knew it... this is such a sweet piece...

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Awwe! I am happy you could relate. :)
Thank you for the sweet review.

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My pleasure.

[Max]

This is so sweet. Nicely done.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you.

[Max]

You are welcome. :-D

[Parul Sharma]

Very unique still amazing ..Loved it :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you! I am glad you liked it!

[Ben Noah Suri]

Interesting write though I can't understand the use of the word hound... Maybe you mean't that he was like a faithful hound. Nice write on pretentions

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you.. And yes you got it so right, that is what I meant by 'hound'..

[Kajal Sharma]

that was short and sweet .....i have a thing for brevity.... good job!!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much Kajal! :)

[An owl on the moon]

Such a wondrous glimpse of the sometimes awkward moments of young love... the dancing glances!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much..!