So they say

They say people change in years,
but you changed me in a day.
They say life is long and hard,
but in your arms I floated and swayed

They mentioned about the darkness

that exists in the alleyway,
but you illumined me from within.

They proclaimed the world to be ravening,
but you kept me safe in your warm cocoon.

They say the day can be harsh
and the sun can give you blisters,
but you wrapped me tenderly
like the moon in the soothing night.

They believe the barren lands can never yield
but you transformed my impotent heart
into a loving blossom!

Author's Note

Just words pouring out of my heart, for someone I am destined to fall for!
I am not in love, but will be someday.
Enjoy!
Please READ, REVIEW and RATE!
Thank you for your time!

Reviews

[Cassie]

wow!!! a poem that would sweep some one off their feet. I enjoyed.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much! This made my day!

[Chirag Kumar]

This is beautiful. Love in its purest form. Full marks..!!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you! Glad it was liked.

[Arshia]

I just love reading romantic pieces of art..and I totally enjoyed this one!
But you wrapped me tenderly..like the moon in the soothing night.
A beautiful poem indeed. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.

[wordman]

women have been changing men forever,great write

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

They both tend to change each other.
Thank you for the kind review.

[Samaira]

It's beautiful how you depict how a person can make another change in ways they never imagined. Maybe that's what love is.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Yes perhaps. Thank you for the kind comment.

[bathtime]

I feel that everyone's dream is to have a poem like this written about them. Your words are lovely, romantic and beautiful. The use of them is effective and brings the point across in a short poem. I really enjoyed the shortness of it, and how direct it is.

Perhaps changing your sentence structure to shorter lines would help it flow a bit better, but that's the only thing i could say that's 'wrong' with it. Really great work.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate! :)

[Eternal Devotion]

This poem was as beautiful as it was moving. Short, sweet and magical. I could feel overwhelming emotion in each and every line.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you. I am glad you felt it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"They believe the barren lands can never yield
But you transformed my impotent heart
Into a loving blossom!"
When we know positive place and friendship. Life can become better. Thank you dear Poet for the excellent poetry. I needed a hopeful and positive poem.
Coyote

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much. I am honoured.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Arunima]

beautifully written to depict how a person's indelible love can make you feel...:):)liked it..:)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much! I appreciate! :)

[Arunima]

pleasure's all mine,mam..:)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

...:)..:)..

[Benson Osuji]

wonderful poem I could actually feel the emotions of this poem reviews mine too

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Oh thank you! Glad you liked it.