Creeping murk

So many screams muffled into silences

Silences that echoed through the walls

Walls that wept blood, night and day

The blood clotted and turned black

As black as her sooty eyes.

Reviews

[Valentine]

Never had to face something like this. Valentine

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

It is really bad, but hundreds face this everyday. Thank you for the comment.

[Chirag Kumar]

Deep, dark, intense. Loved it :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you.

[Edis Radoncic]

It's not what we say but what we choose not to say is what counts. Good job! (As usual). Also is that picture Mariska hargitay from law and order Special Victims Unit? You know Olivia Benson? lol I know it is a random question.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Edis.
No I didn't know Olivia Benson, but now I do.
I got picture from Google images downloaded a long while ago without the information of its source. N yes it could be of Olivia, there is a striking resemblance of her eyes, we never know.
Thank you.

[E G TEN]

Hello Jyoti, a sensational - eerie feeling you had
Bestowed,, very cool poem thanks for sharing.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much!

[Asra Hakak]

strong emotions deep thoughts
I loved this one
great piece of work JYOTI

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much Asra.

[Devanshu Rajput]

Gave me a goosebump. Profoundly dark. Loved reading it.

Thanks for sharing.

Devanshu

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much, Devanshu for your review.

[Devanshu Rajput]

You're welcome dear.

Devanshu

[PoeticChico]

Woah, Very intense. Great poem, good job!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Alex.

[Bear]

Bravo! Intense and chilling! You have all but mastered writing in English my friend, I would take your work as being written by a native American. I am both proud and happy to see your work turning out so well and so fast, showing you are a true student of life. Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much, Bear.
These kind words of your's, means a lot to me!
Made my day! :)

[Isabel]

A terse piece of writing packed with such ferocity. Enjoyed it very much, great write!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much!

[AaronFreitas]

Nice descriptions Jyoti... very powerful and you give the reader a perfect image.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much!