I feel you

When the glistening sunlight showers its warmth

I feel you embracing me,

When I see a shooting star leaving its trail on the sky

I see you descending for me.

 

When the mighty stars’ light penetrates through the cloud

I feel you twinkling above,

When a fresh morning breeze teases me with its charm

I discern your good wishes for me.

 

When I pass a playground and hear a child’s laughter

Nostalgia of our time grips me,

When the magical droplets of rain shimmer and dance

I feel you smiling and blessing me!

 

 

Author's Note

It is said that death can only touch the body and not the soul.

So this piece is penned in the memories of my late father.
Miss you, Papa!

Reviews

[Carbon Muse]

Such a beautifully written piece. If only souls could reach down and comment, if your beloved dad could tell you how much it must mean to be remembered so ...

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Yes iff..
Thank you for the kind words.

[Inject Positivity]

This one reminds me of my late father.....Heartwarming poem.....Thank you so much frnd for writing this....One of your best one....

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much for your kind review. I am glad to know that it reminded you of your late father. May he RIP.

[Inject Positivity]

Thank you mate....You deserve my thanks.....

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

:).....:)...

[Lluvs]

Very beautiful poem (: Its poems like this that remind me of why I write, I really enjoyed this reading this.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you for the beautiful review.
Glad if my work can provoke such faith! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Awesome tribute to a loved one who unfortunately, cannot be with you anymore... It could also be interpreted as a poem, for a childhood friend, who wasn't seen for a long long time, or a lover, far far away from you. i love it when a poem can be interpreted in more ways than one, but with all the possibilities being very similar to one another. very well penned.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Its a great compliment. Thank you Danny.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

you're welcome :)

[Filipe Magalhães]

Very good writing. It shows the true core of the poetry: the ability of conveying senses and feelings. Through this poem, you bring this memories and feelings to the readers. Moreover, you used such a simple and common things - sunlight, embrace, nostalgia - like powerfull tools for your poetry. Congratulations!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much for your kind visit, Filipe.
Glad you felt the essence of my words.

[Shei]

such moving words Jyoti, I could feel your deep love for your late father :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much She I for the kind words.

[h d e rushin]

splendid! Your work is always so true; always so infinitely possible. dana

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much for the kind words, Dana.

[AaronFreitas]

This is great write... perfect descriptions. I enjoyed it very much :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you for giving it a read, Aaron.

[Adiyah]

A nyc interpretation jyoti..u made use of heavenly objcts..beautiful

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Adiyah!