Darkness (10-Words)

Bleeding words..

Sometimes the nights are dark but the days are darker.

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

I read this over and over Jyoti..Life can hit a body hard and it's known that Christmas eve in those
hours between 6 and 8:30 there are the most recorded suicides. But I love the simplicity here...
which I imagine is true...

life and death is just that simple...dana

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much for your insightful words.

[Adam Adams]

So true.
Yeah, sometimes the days be loomed way much darker than the darkness of gone-night. And it all just seems to be happened when you're in love & your spirit keep bobbing in the ocean of infatuated lake of fairy dreams, for no reason. Kinda love the depth of your poetry. Short. Simple. And artistically quite interesting. Looking forward to reading your work!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Adams for your warm review. Always welcome to browse through any of my work here.
Glad you visited.

[Scrap]

Bullseye!!!! Just awesome!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Haha! Thanks dear poetess!
PS: I cannot call u scrap!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Let me offer a tourniquet of hope!

Regards,
Al

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Well thank you, Al, for your kind words. Much appreciated.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Absolutely Amazing!!!
Loved it!!!
:)
you inspired this mess:

I always escape the dark, to stray in the daylight.

forgive me:)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow! That was cool!
Kinda has an opposite view point but bang on!
Thank you for your kind visit!

[Gaurav Bhattacharya]

Nights can be a time for healing. I like the way these words are so strong and provoking yet very open to interpretation. Amazing words Jyoti. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much, Saurav. Your kind words are really appreciated.

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

This is downright awesome. I really admire writers like yourself who can accomplish so much depth and meaning in such few words. This piece brings forth a feeling that we all have, but just usually don't think to put into words. This was really good. Stay inspired.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much, Kristan. Your kind visit is very much appreciated! :)

[McBear]

Jeeeeeze. That short sentence, just made so much of an image in my head. There is countless things you could make those words mean.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thanks!
That was the intention.

[McBear]

c: You nailed it

[Lily Finch]

Wowww truly amazing....and perfect imagery......

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Lily for the kind visit.

[Lily Finch]

Welcome :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I think, sometimes, when pain breaks you down, then at night you can at least escape into sleep, with.hopes bout a better tomorrow.

pain can be described in short writes, such as this one
100 points from me.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much Danby dear, for your valuable insights!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Sorry Danny!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

you're welcome.

[wordman]

we are strange creatures,with our emotions,loved the write

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Wordman!