Darkness (10-Words)

Bleeding words..

Sometimes the nights are dark but the days are darker.

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

I read this over and over Jyoti..Life can hit a body hard and it's known that Christmas eve in those
hours between 6 and 8:30 there are the most recorded suicides. But I love the simplicity here...
which I imagine is true...

life and death is just that simple...dana

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much for your insightful words.

[Shivalik Kalsotra]

a very intelligent use of such powerful words to convey such a deep meaning...gr8 work

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you for the kind words.

[Indra Neil]

a profound quote! so much conveyed in so few words!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much for your kind visit.

[Indra Neil]

you are welcome!

[JayceeC]

This reads like a Rumi quote. It sits there, an universal truth, for people to read and digest, in any way you can possibly. However, it is a such a large concept that you keep coming back to it. Nicely done!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much, JayeeC. Means a lot, coming from you.

[3X3MPLER]

so much said with not so many words

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you.

[Salvatore]

Great! You said a lot with a few words. Compliments.
Salvatore

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much for your kind words.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem told the truth. You told a complete story in so few words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much for your kind words.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Eliot Knight]

I would like to know what led you to write these words, since it it open to interpretation.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Just the very nature of sadness and how it makes the nights more bearable than waking hours.
Thank you for reading my work.

[FaeryQueen]

why r all ur 10 w poems SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO genuinely EPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICCCCC????????????????///

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much Khatoon but this is my only 10 words poem. :D

[ImRan kabir]

i want more time to realize and feel more and more this line...
bcz its not an ordinary line Miss Jyoti.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much Imran. This line is written with the hope for open for interpretation.