Darkness (10-Words)

Bleeding words..

Sometimes the nights are dark but the days are darker.

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

I read this over and over Jyoti..Life can hit a body hard and it's known that Christmas eve in those
hours between 6 and 8:30 there are the most recorded suicides. But I love the simplicity here...
which I imagine is true...

life and death is just that simple...dana

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much for your insightful words.

[Deepak Belbase]

before the rain sometimes it let you afraid of a storm but life always win, the hope always win... I Gauss i fall in love with your words... they sometimes remind of a dream i always want to live in...

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much for your kind words.

[MelissaAndres]

True, Jyoti. Love the picture you have chosen as well.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Melissa!

[MelissaAndres]

You're welcome!

[Relic]

This really hits the reader without even having to clarify what it means. A sad little comment on a life.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you for your kind words.

[Stan Lee]

Nice one Jyoti! The nights are often a peaceful, quiet dark. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Yes, they are.
Thank you for the kind words.

[AaronFreitas]

I love the way its open to interpret your own kind of darkness. Awesome 10 word write :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Aaron!

[Emily]

Very powerful line!
Keep it up!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thanx Emily!

[Isabel]

Wow, concise yet powerful.
I find I can relate to this piece. Really thought it was great! Well done.
I'm going to save this in my favorites.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much, Maria for your kind words. They encourages a lot. :)

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, how darkly you play with the light of the world within. Such hidden places, secret sighing thoughts of these paths we walk on, and must face even in the pain of sunlit illumination. Powerful.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much, Craig! Means a lot. :)

[Perkele.7885]

Well done dark eyes, the hearts are even darker still! (10 words)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, sir and the heart may bleed black slime. (10 words)

[Valentine]

Looks like the trees on All Hallows Eve. Valentine

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Dark days look all the same.
Thank you for the comment.