Perilous love (16 words)

He lets her rule his heart so fiercely,

that her mere touch can destroy his soul.

Author's Note

Thank you for your time!

Reviews

[E G TEN]

Hello Jyoti, I've seen men gone mad all in the name of love
May that be perilously or in just simply by the look
Of their eyes. Yes, some of us are weak like
So :-) You had expressed so many in
Such few cool words. Quite
Lovely if I may say
Many thanks
For this
Poem

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much for your honest review. Glad you liked it and could relate. :)

[Vinay]

This is a definite master piece! I'm guessing you wrote this for some competition to capture the theme in 16 words. I wonder if there can be a better one!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you! And I just came up with this after watching a movie.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you! And I just came up with this after watching a movie.

[sinNsincerity]

Are you the soul destroyer?
Sharply written!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

No i am not, but i do know a few.
Thank you for the visit.

[Gaurav Bhattacharya]

Perilous sums it up pretty well. Great short write!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you!

[Eliot Knight]

Or elevate perhaps? such is love.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Yes perhaps...
Glad to see you back!

[Eliot Knight]

It's good to be back!

[Echoes of Eros]

How well you know the force and fire of love. It can transform us or drown us in its ocean. To love like this, with all the heart and soul, it can be the most satisfying pathway of life, or it can haunt us every day after. You make such a world in these two lines. xo

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you for your insights.. Life is a good teacher.

[Echoes of Eros]

So let us pray we are good students. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

.....Yeah! :D

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
so beautiful........sweet....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you're welcome!!! :) :)

[JayceeC]

Truly a romantic piece, nicely done.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you!

[Blackheart]

Always fascinating how such short tales convey such a deep and beautiful message. Really loved this!
Love is a contradictory emotion. Almost impossible to understand. Having effects to either change your life forever or to tear it asunder.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you for your insights.

[Ellen Kolman]

Awesome! I understand this very well in reverse...I loved a man so fiercely so all consuming that when he left me, I completely imploded...took me a long time to be myself again, much of this is reflected in my poetry, it is easy to see the before and after poems...anyway...you have a real talent...keep writing; keep loving; love is worth the pain...

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

So sorry to here that. Love is that weird thing that can make and break you completely! But it's worth it!
Thank you for your kind visit!

[Mary Helda]

Awww..wow,i would love to have that kind of power over a man:-):-)...perfectly written

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you! Well me too! ;-)