Perilous love (16 words)

He lets her rule his heart so fiercely,

that her mere touch can destroy his soul.

Author's Note

Thank you for your time!

Reviews

[E G TEN]

Hello Jyoti, I've seen men gone mad all in the name of love
May that be perilously or in just simply by the look
Of their eyes. Yes, some of us are weak like
So :-) You had expressed so many in
Such few cool words. Quite
Lovely if I may say
Many thanks
For this
Poem

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much for your honest review. Glad you liked it and could relate. :)

[Valentine]

Sounds very cold, who wants a wimp of a male...not the normal woman. Valentine

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Yes someone who can easily turn into a possessive, obsessive partner.
Thank you for your kind visit.

[zunie frost]

wow !!!!! so powerful words Jyoti ...... i love it !!!! love can be so magical but sometimes it's dark !!!!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Zunie. Your kind, appreciating words uplifts my spirit.

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!!! dear

[Inject Positivity]

Is it a short verse poem? I don't think so Jyoti.....The wave of thoughts its flowing is so much more than the words in the poem....Love is powerful and risky both at the same time.....Just wonderful.....God bless you....:(Dhiman)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much for reflecting so beautifully to my words.
Your kind review is very much appreciated, Dhiman.

[Alison Gross]

Something I hope we can all experience.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Love can evoke such dangerous, powerful passion in us. So I hope it yields all good experiences.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you for the kind visit.

[Willard Wells]

Oh yes and so true when a woman really has a man's soul and he is so deeply in love, it's dangerous. You hope she has good intentions, since he is lost in her.

Great short verse as I can not respond in same. Well Done.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much, Mr. Wells. Your insightful words are very much appreciated.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

a few words can often say a lot. well done

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Danny. Your visit always encourages.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

you're welcome :)

[Gaurav]

A nice writeup on the intensity of love. Thanks for sharing.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Gaurav, your kind words are much appreciated.