O Wanderer!

Wanderer, oh wanderer where have you been?

I've been to the fairyland to see their queen.

Is she just as classy as the people say?

She roams like a pixie and is on her way!

Author's Note

Doodle!
Do leave a comment. :)

Thank you for your time!

Reviews

[Akki]

very nice poem and this poem gives me idea to me so thanks! keep writing !

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Akki.
Glad you liked it! :)

[Salvatore]

Very nice poem. In few words you said so much about how beautiful the fantasy can be.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Salvatore.
Glad you liked it! :)

[Adam Adams]

short. simple. & way systematically sophisticated poetry you've come up with!

looked more like a smooth fairy you were supposed to be scribbling sometime, may be, at night? or in the faze of fuzzed morn? or may be, at the gloomsy gloomy-ness of Melancholic "noon"? quite entertaining it is. rhythm's, of course, treasurable as usual. great job, Miss Ablaze.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Adam. I doddled it during a boring morning lecture.

[Adam Adams]

ah.. morning lecture? great. me too used to write such "doodles" when i attended some of my lectures. always felt dead boring at that time. lol

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Cute!

Just like the fairytale nursery rhymes of old!

Short and sweet and with a very lovely picture!

Good job.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Doodley! Glad you visited. This is a piece I doodled in class! :)

[iamshadowine]

nice one :) keep writing :D

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Short, sweet and good rhyming

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Shabeeh. It was fun penning this down.

[Shabeeh Haider]

....and fun reading it.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Ha! Thanks!

[Gaurav Bhattacharya]

Short and sweet :) nice one

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you!

[Isabel]

Such a fun and short read, nice piece!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Maria!

[Eliot Knight]

What a cute little rhyme!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Eliot! :D

[FaeryQueen]

I like this piece... short *_*; but i really like this piece.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Khatoon! Glad you liked it!