Her

That day she witnessed the invisible; 

Of it she spoke with her lips sealed.  

Many ignorant heard her voice; 

Just to let it fade in silence, 

 While she kept on screaming. 

 -jyoti_ablaze

Reviews

[Aphy!]

So powerful in its simplicity. Loved the calmness of this piece. Really, you can say a lot with only 5 stanza's giving room for your reader to react differently to it.
Well done. Best read today
Aphy

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Aphy! Glad you liked it.

[Avinash]

There are many layers within this short work of big meaning.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Sometimes words are not enough. Glad you visited.

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful words and places you took the reader. You create thoughts and visions of struggle hidden inside. Thank you Jyoti for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Sometimes I try letting those voices out. Thank you for your kind review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Poet.

[wordman]

crying out in her mind,lot of emotion in this great write !

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Wordman!

[V]

An interesting piece, playing with oxymorons. Short but expressive. I enjoyed reading.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Vanessa, for your kind visit.

[V]

You're welcome.

[Antoñyo]

I love a piece that speaks deeper than intended, because people tend to have their own perspective and/or life connections. That said, this, to me, speaks also of wisdom itself...and that not everyone actually gets wiser in necessary areas of life.
Thanks for sharing!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Profound words Sir. Thank you for the kind visit.

[Antoñyo]

You're welcome

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, Jyoti, you always flood your words with rivers of movement and emotion. This is so painfully dark and powerful. How her silences speak so profoundly.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Craig! She always find me.

[An owl on the moon]

A divine muse, to be sure.

[M P Ramesh]

jyoti,
only other SHE can hear it with full sense............................ I envy you and those.......

carry on..

m p

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Alas. Life is so unfair.
Thank you for your kind review.