Unsaid

Reviews

[Stan Lee]

Nice writing Jyoti. Sorry I only just saw your read request. I've been flat out lately. I'm glad to see you're still writing! I enjoyed this poem and how you expressed your emotions. My favorite line was "the mind knew better than the heart ever could". So very sad but true! Thanks for sharing. Stay inspired! :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Hey there! How are you?
So glad to see you too!
I am myself flat out lately, but i do manage to write quite often, just don't post much.
Although, off late, posting on Instagram has caught my fancy and it is much more easy but ofcourse you don't get to see such beautiful reviews and words by fellow poets there. That's something only WC can offer. Hence, my heart keeps tugging me to return here.
So glad to hear from you.

[Stan Lee]

Can I follow you on instagram? :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Oh yes yes please!
I go by my pen name - jyoti_ablaze

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

And do DM me there so that I can know its you! This is exciting!

[Suhd]

So naturally and smoothly expressed what poets often feel. Thumbs Up ! Keep sharing.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Suhd.

[APOORVA]

awesome writing, such amazing flow of emotions...

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Apoorva!
Glad you liked it.

[wordman]

i wonder,do we really ever move on,maybe just accept life as it is

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Indeed. We just accept fate.
Thank you for your kind words!

[mou]

we move on but the question is how far..unsaid words are probably the most familiar tunes of heart sometime which we ignore intentionally..very beautiful write jyoti

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much!
Glad you liked it.

[Einstein Noodle]

what a gem Jyoti!! i love love love this smart, sarcastic fresh and creative poem .. oh the unsaid word ..the biting of the tongue ..i love this ..thanks so much for sharing
E.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much E!
Glad you liked it!

[Avinash]

Nice presentation and excellent choice of words.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Avinash, for your kind words.

[thetish]

So many unsaid words die away in my heart. Lovely, painfully true piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you for your kind words.

[Bear]

Critique: (the moment you came in being) came into being

Review: Very touching to all word smiths as we are always on the look out for different expressive words. Just think the first dictionary printed in the late 1700's had like 40,000 words in it and many of them have been replaced with updated versions. This testament to dying words is such an great idea I wish I had thought of it rather than be inspired by you to write a poem about it :~) Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Bear!
Glad you liked it!