North of Nowhere

this is my first poem, just wrote out what I was thinking. Let me know your opinions!

I live lost in the glowing mist in my mind

which is West of Wherever

East of Everywhere

South of Somewhere

and North of Nowhere

but somehow

it all makes perfect sense to me

So here I am

spinning in this place

watching the rest of the world

spin around

as they feel completely lost

and confused

and depressed

I'm feeling completely at ease......

Reviews

[quixotic_rose]

I can relate to writing out a first poem. I'm not one for poetry but sometimes the mood strikes. the use of direction is genius and I love how to you everything is good and you're content while the people around are in a kind of chaos and not content with themselves. Just chilling out being a simple person and having a good time. I adore this poem :)

[Kelsy]

East of Everywhere South of Somewhere West of Wherever and North of Nowhere.I don't kmow why but just loves those words.....I think there is more deep underlying meaning to them.Nice great job for first poem (you really would do good in poems)just be eased and let it flow from within.....LovingIt

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I like your use of directions and how you thereby concretely explain the feeling of being somewhere far away.
The line
"but somehow
it all makes perfect sense to me" is priceless! Don't I know it!
I like that you end this poem with the upbeat
" I'm feeling compleatly at ease..." refreshing to be happy with the now and where you are.

Only a couple of typos seen, both are "compleatly" I think you mean "completely"
...as I said...refreshing read.

[Patrick]

it made me laugh which im not sure is the right reaction