Some Do It Fast, But I'll Do It Better In Smaller Amounts

Inspired by my own thoughts and "Count to Six and Die"

They have their eyes on the sky.

I have the crimes and sins of the world.

Metal in my hands.

The mind of a frail, young girl.

There are angels in my bedroom.

I can't telly you why.

"Some do it fast, but I'll do it better in smaller amounts."

But it weighs me down.

Click-click-click!

Righteousness dies out

"Some do it fast, but I'll do it better in smaller amounts."

She's got her eyes on the ground.

I have the metal and the sins of the world.

Weight in my head.

Body of a a wasted amount

The angels left my bedroom.

And death has slipped in my mind.

"Some do it fast, but I did it better in smaller amounts."

Click! Click-click!

Click-click-click!

Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!

BANG!

Reviews

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

You will be recognized for it, high standard remains in time.

[jay]

well this is cool i can feel this pain in poem it fell sad.