The haunted

I wrote this for my story Curse of the Moon but i think i will omit it because the story line has changed from what it was :D

you haunt me in my dreams.
I think of you in every waking hour.
Though I have never met you I know you are mine.
in a past life we were together but now we are not.
you haunt me in my dreams.
I think of you every waking hour.
why do you insist on torturing me.
I can not eat I can not sleep.
I am in love with a ghost from a past life.
I have never seen your face and yet you haunt my dream.
a secret kept from me by the gods it seems...

Reviews

[PearlPoet]

Beautifully hunting ~deep sigh~

[K. Hicks]

Thank you!!!

[Night]

The emotions behind this is dark, yet somehow I get a sense of something beautiful lurking underneath (twistedly so) I enjoyed this very much!

[K. Hicks]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

[Night]

I did. Thank you for sharing!

[Sheila Kline]

Oh to be plagued by such thoughts and desires in a dream and then to wake and realize they are all just part of a dream, and to have it be a recurring dream makes it more difficult to accept the reality of one who cannot be! It is very interesting!

[K. Hicks]

thank you!!

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:>);;;;;;;;;;;;;;

[K. Hicks]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

[Pryde Foltz]

Yes, the loves we have in our dreams. So tragic; they live only in our thoughts. Lovely poem.

[K. Hicks]

Thank you!

[Costa Siwale]

A delightful poem, I like the rhythm..well done

[K. Hicks]

thanks again :D

[annabellee]

Really good poem, I liked the repetition a lot.
"you haunt me in my dreams
I think of you every waking hour"
that makes it even more powerful.
Well done :)

[K. Hicks]

thank you annabellee :D

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Latifa]

I think of you every waking hour.
great poem powerful and emotional

[K. Hicks]

thanks latifa :D