Deserved

Deserved

K.S. 6/09/13

 

 

I once wrote,

like you did,

so short,

that when I,

broke it down again,

pretty isn’t close,

so long ago,

my  chance to live.

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Reviews

[Rahul]

wow...so nice and sweet write. A short piece and a beautiful piece came directly from your heart once again.1001/100 :)

[Zero_Edge88]

"It was a stolen moment, that's all I could tell you about it. I didn't know what it was that I couldn't put my fingers on it but the more I look into it the more I feel taken aback from it. There's no denying that I am untruly yours but really the feelings never change when I look at you in the eye!

As the guy who holds his balloons too close to his heart I feel the same of my emotions when I am with you. I fear that each one will burst or lose its way when you give me yours. However, I must interject, reject and let it intersect for what I know about you can be given in an exchange of such inanimate object.

For what is trapped inside must be set in free of its own kind. There I have to know you're letting me go up in the sky where we belong and even if it bursts let the sky know those were my emotions and words that I wanted to tell you. I didn't know how much we meant for each other until I realized my emotion was in the balloon you were carrying. So let this be in the air that I feel the feelings that you and I share and keep it close. For I know your love is not only in the air but is unbound by any string we hold together."

I have to admit, I saw myself singing Dashboard Confessional's "Stolen" in this poem lol. The pop reference I had made me feel like this. It was so breathless (no pun intended :P) that I felt it.