Black Hole

Black Hole

K.S. 2013

 

I am fragments of you and me colliding

Together within the blackness of our life

Falling into the rubble

Fueled by your ostracism

I am the definition of painful

Memories like the darkness in night

Finding the hollow point inside

Fixating on the needle in front of me

So that you can roam sparkling galaxies free

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Reviews

[Zero_Edge88]

"Oh for what's coming it is but in the event of this horizon that has yet seen its moment. A point of origin you might ask as to conceal its secrecy and create this vision you hone yourself into. This is but the taste of what makes us.

A rising point, a boiling and an elevation point to where no feelings can ever be touched again. Even sublimated it coalesced into the skies long before it even had a chance to kiss the ocean a goodbye.

This is in fact a cross over, a change and a rebirth of changes in the way we are today. For what was yesterday but the nebula that was written all over the stars that soon became the scenic supernovae we were supposed to chase after but then it dissipated just like you.

Isn't this what the beauty of it is all about! And then I look across, I look forward and I take a step forward because I am gravitated to your singularity. A force unlike any other, a reckoning worth a swiftly divine retribution, and an accidental miracle waiting to happen! For this is what it means to be alive even as I am sucked in through those eyes you call your horizon event. It's a beautiful thing to be colliding with you again."

In the most cosmic sense it was written in such astronomic proportions even the stars lament and wish for themselves to continue shining beautifully even though they are pulled closer to the black holes for what they have to show and offer would surely be the one to keep you guided and never lost in their ways.

[K.S.78]

"It's a beautiful thing to be colliding with you again." -love that btw... Well said!

[Zero_Edge88]

Well thank you on that for sure :)

[Salar Majak]

Oh my, this holds a lot of emotions inside, i really like how it flows and how there is an air of mystery surrounding it
bravo

[K.S.78]

Trying to explain without explaining I guess lol. I am so glad you liked it ty!

[Salar Majak]

XD i loved it, keep up!

[Rob Funk]

Very nice work.

[K.S.78]

Thank you for reading much appreciated as always :)

[Patrick O'Neil]

Wow, so much emotion in a few lines. Awesome write,and such a powerful closure : "So that you can roam sparkling galaxies free". Well done on this. really like this one.

[K.S.78]

Thanks! Been trying to not make all my poems novels lol