Beyond the Shrouded Mist

Drop the Fear

Do not offer up your heart,
And yet give it up complete,
Allow not any boundaries,
Welcoming the truest love to meet.

Fear not beyond the shrouded mist,
For that is where the magic lies,
Where many rainbows never end,
Where hearts are taught to fly.

You may feel confusion,
You may loose yourself within the flay.
But the further you go into the mist,
It gets clearer down the way.

Beyond the mist is where you learn to
Jump and leap and soar,
Dancing over mountain tops,
Right through eternities door.

Where you will feel enveloped,
In a warm and fuzzy flow,
Where you can smell the gardens,
In your soul that ever grows.

Taking time to swim,
In the river that knows no doubt,
Settling on a nice warm rock,
Wondering not what it's about.

Hanging out your worry,
On a line cast out to sea,
Feeling the breeze kiss your face,
Understanding that you are free.

Free within your being,
Attaching no thought to you at all,
Re-stitching your own duality,
Finally answering the universal call.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

love the thought and wisdom that went into this .. its been very foggy around here the last several days .. but as is the fog's want .. it lifts in the sunshine .. i think the last line is very interesting ..it provokes my thoughts .. a beautiful thing to believe in .. like all human beings are innately called by our beneficent Creator ..:)
E.

[Pale Divine]

Symbiotic and well versed, love it thanks for sharing a part of your life :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have gone back into the mist....for a long time i wouldn't...
i realize love is possible again...but for years...didn't believe that.
and even now...i don't feel that we ever go forward quite the same way...once we answered the call of love and got crushed..it's never quite the same.
but we can try to let go as much as possible.

i think that is all we can ask of ourselves...the reaction is just human nature protecting the heart.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love is the greatest risk we can take and also gives the sweetest rewards… your poem is a magical as love itself.

[KWP]

ha ... i think you are too kind ... love .... is .. well .... it is all .... thanks for reading sunshine x x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are very welcome, not sure bout being kind, telling the truth yes. Always a pleasure hon xo

[Frieda P]

I love your universal call, it can prove to be pretty scary in the mist, but if we don't take a chance, we live a pretty dull life, our aim should be extraordinary, as is your poem Betty! Brava xo

[Daydreamer]

##Fear not beyond the shrouded mist,
For that is where the magic lies,
Where many rainbows never end,
Where hearts are taught to fly.

##You may loose yourself within the flay.
But the further you go into the mist,
It gets clearer down the way.

Sensational writing 😁

[KWP]

thank you Manal .. glad you liked it ... even though it rhymes... oh gawd I am a silly rhymer thats for sure

[Daydreamer]

hahahahaha no! it's just the "assertive" me, you're all good😉

[A. Amos]

First of all loved the title and the magic of your write made the flavor simply marvelous, one of your finest work..

[Ayushi]

This is so beautiful and lovely poetry..
I feel inspired.
Well done :)