Pure Love

Detection

Of

Perfection

Creating

A Tidy Deflection

Today I think

I may Try

A different flavour

Of Sweet Pie

Permeating sensations

Delivered from above

Mixing

Together

To make pure love

Reviews

[BL]

Nice lines and flowed really well, they almost slipped off the page

[KWP]

Ha and that's pretty much how it was written too ... Thanks and lovely to meetcha xxx

[BennyBooth]

I loved this... Thanks for the smile factor! Needed it today... Wonderful little piece!

[KWP]

ahhaaa welcome and nice to see a fellow Aussie xx

[BennyBooth]

You're welcome friend... :)

[misha]

This is such a sweet and beautiful poem. Great write!

[Sarabelle]

Ahh....Another target hit! Awesome!
♥Sarabelle♥

[Awakened Rose]

AHhhh what a beautiful creation this poem is. The lovely title grabbed my attention, and the poem was everything I'd hoped!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

isn't that a sweet little poem… but you know that is why we need to expand our experiences outside out comfort zone so we fully understand who we are and who is right for us.

[Einstein Noodle]

send me two fingers to the glass .. shaken not stirred if you please .. i am an incorrigible risk taker .. so please send a clean up crew for later :)
love this .. and wasn't it you that wanted help with free verse?? correct me if i am wrong ..
enjoyed reading .. nice work!
E.
ps. yes there is rhyme and rhythm but you have freed yourself from couplets .. how do you feel? :)

[A. Amos]

Short yet sensanational...enjoyed the read.

[Ayushi]

Short and sweet..
The rhymes make it pleasant to read.
Very well written :)