Surpassing Emotion

come dance with me 

there is a place I know 

everybody is welcome 

BLISS 

emotions not required

emotions no longer desired

time on earth 

is often spent

following the path of emotion 

Happy

Sad

Guilty

Glad

Ecstatic

Mad

Stop!

come dance with me 

there is a place I know

everybody is welcome

destination BLISS

upon entry 

you must let go ……………………………….

Reviews

[Ana B.]

Beautiful and simple and yet with the potent impact, lovely writing :)

[sinNsincerity]

I'm already here waiting for you to catch me!
OMG This has so much life to it.
I love it!

[KWP]

oh gawd - and here I was thinking you were catching me .... bugger ... we are both going to SPLAT XX

Cheers you X

[Mitali Shah]

Live every moment and love every moment as if this is your last. Brilliant piece

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful dance, KWP, love it and the form too. Well done. :) Rudi

[R Smith]

never ending bliss Elizabeth the peak of spirituality as we ascend to oneness with Godhead, when reached as you say let go, to remain is the eventual goal for us all, great writing Oz :)

[Valentine]

Oh how we used to dance when in the hunting days. Loved it, makes me think of living over some of those good old days. Valentine

[Willard Wells]

Dance tonight like there is no tomorrow. Nice work on a night of letting go and just having fun.

[Einstein Noodle]

but can i hold your hand!? :}
always a delight to see you have posted KW! this thoroughly emotive piece truly thrills me .. i love to watch dancers ..so effortlessly flying and gliding and gracefully twirling .. your poem puts a spiritual aspect to it ... so freely in my own minds imagination there i am in harmony .. such a fine experience!
E.
ps .. you are mastering the letting go freedom of free verse! love reading backwards downhill ;)

[Rinzin Samdup]

great piece. one life, live with smiles and happiness. let us all happy LIVE and happy LEAVE.

[wordman]

yes my dear i will dance with you ! loved the poem,the presentation was superb !!