Powerful! Doesn't it feel like screaming from the foot of a mountain trying to get your words heard to those up top? My soul is sore and I fear the worst for future generations.. my best attempt to make amends is to raise my children to respect our planet and open their eyes to the lies from those in power.. great write, I applaud you!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Also meant to say, the picture you chose, wherever that graffiti came from... I absolutely love it
Oh my God.... this is fantastic, i don't know how else to put it. I absolutely adore the fact that your work always has a social message; and this one is pretty urgent too. We have gone and made mother earth a wasteland, i like to believe what has happened to the earth is a byproduct of human greed. Each word that you have used is piece is relevant and powerful and the poem gets better and better till the very end. I especially liked that part where you call out for brave and valiant warriors, also loved the part where you apologize to the future generations.
Absolutely LOVED it. You're a rock star.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
ahhh you are very kind - and yes flattery will get you everywhere my friend - I am so happy this res.. read moreahhh you are very kind - and yes flattery will get you everywhere my friend - I am so happy this resonated with you - made my night you did X
Although I agree with this, I deeply believe that if there is one thing to teach future generations, it's how we treat ourselves & the people around us. After all, we're the ones taking care or not taking care of the planet, right? It starts with how we feel about sharing the planet with others.
This was written well though.
- Brittney
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
you know what - I agree with you complete - I guess I was was just trying to get at the 'once we lea.. read moreyou know what - I agree with you complete - I guess I was was just trying to get at the 'once we learn to accept everything no matter what, the stress will leave, the worry disappears, life is live though enlightened eyes - more of a holistic approach to say - even though we messed up it's all going to be fine -
I very much appreciate your thoughts here - they jolted me back to earth and reminded me of the basics - ahhhh I do live somewhere in the clouds at times :) XX
10 Years Ago
There's nothing wrong with living in the clouds! Too many people are way too serious & can't take a .. read moreThere's nothing wrong with living in the clouds! Too many people are way too serious & can't take a break from reality to dig deep into a fantasy. (Well, other than a sexual one - that topic seems to be easy for a lot of people. Lol).
Well said Boss, you gave everyone a damn good talking to and much deserved it was, thank you i feel bad about myself and i'm a good guy......i think? Wonderful work Lizzie, if your standing parliament you get my vote :)
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