Emotions Echo

an attempt at prose - I really have no idea what I am doing so if any of you know anything about this writing style - I would be happy to hear your thoughts :) XX

Eyes open wide awake, middle of the night 2:04am to be exact. Roused from sleep by the continual, unwilling to cease echo of emotions vibrating criss cross, cross criss through the mountain of thought daring me to come climb solo. No ropes, across rocky terrain, sheer cliff faces, crevasses calling out, up from deep within the void of the mountainous underbelly. Never being one to look a challenge in the face, turn and walk away, I start the climb. The thoughts, of you, always of you, flood my mind as I slip, fall into a rushing rapid of water the mountain placed in my way. You are drenching me, I am drowning. Push and fight with little reserve. Surface, gasp, swim away once more. The mountains are laughing, parroting the denial I refuse to face. The mountains know the secrets of echoing emotions, a lesson I attempt to learn. I stumble on, for we must always progress forward, even with the last exhale from our lungs, the last view, the last thought, the last vibration of shattered memory entrusted only to you.

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

wow you captured me so well kwp to the letter. great work , fantastic and extra points for writing about me lol

[catwoman]

this was certainly a wonderful piece of writing,,
the words were perfect and the metaphor was very apt.
i really liked it :)

[Jamestown]

Another fantastic piece of work!
Very nicely done, I like the echoing metaphor use and imagery
in the words chosen:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Belinda Crane]

Hello... I like the momentum of this piece. It makes you rush to read it. It's the rapid emotions in life. It's saying a lot. :)

[KWP]

ahhh thank you Belinda and nice to see you here :) I am learning here ... glad you felt it XX