The Code? The Key?

the key d****t 

the key 

or perhaps it is a code

do you know the code? 

you know the code 

allowing the universe 

trapped inside me 

to spill forth once more?

as I 

bathe in the sunlight 

gaze at the stars

see a reflection in the moon 

I spot Jupiter and Mars

as I 

bathe in the river water

breathe the crisp air

warm hearts by the fire

rest on earth yes jus right there

as I 

touch with temptation 

smell the fragrance of love 

taste all within you 

hear lullaby’s from above 

it is 

all within me

yes the universe 

has my key 

but without 

unlocking the door

I am not yet 

complete 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

each verse is its own scene filled with grace and contemplation for me .. i am challenged by your closing to continue the search with hope until i learn to give up and give in ;) but i am such an obstinate Irish lad ;{ pleasant emotive philosophical read for me .. i highly recommend it :)
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[Valentine]

Perhaps...the sad part is most people jump into a life style not meant for happiness and never take the time to find the key that would unlock happiness's door here on earth. Valentine Great write,

[andrew mitchell]

a lovely formatted write with all the extras just right!

[Adam Adams]

May be, the code must be your "heart" plus its "sensuality" and the "key" - your "love" with the mixture of indulgence. Very nice poetry. Enjoyed reading it! :)

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Yes ma'am, it's all there inside you :))))

[Jesse]

One will never be complete until one 'knows'. and that knowing is not easy at all to grasp but it comes and can come in one life time. ... There are moments of knowingness in all of us and moments of sublime. ... I too have turn a door, and fallen on my face, ........ .. I remember a time. Your poems are very good whent hey provoke thought. tks

[SleeplessVolcano]

this is so alluring....full of the electricity of passion. Sometimes we may even have the right key, but trying it in a rush can also cause frustration.....

Beautifully written! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes it isn't until later in life that we find that key...
i see double meaning here and think of stevie wonder's album, "songs in the key of life"

there is a certain song, a certain melody to completeness...and often we rest at the doorstep but have to find the right key to get in..

this poem soothed me for some reason...guess i am still looking for the key, but maybe see the doorway close by...