Release

mind games with me ...

limitless

yet contained

boundless

and still in chains

free

but cannot fly

questions

always why?

confusion

it takes hold

promises 

of the pot of gold

give yourself

unto your being

tap into 

untapped seeing

release 

release

release

release

with release 

the gift of peace 

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Wish even the thoughts were released forever from mind. Life would had been the gift of peace then, like you say! well written!

[Arunima]

Freedom--- it's what i see myself enjoying in my dreams...

but, then as it is said---
"IN MY DREAMS YOU ARE MINE;
BUT IN MY LIFE YOU ARE A DREAM..."

that's what freedom is in my life..............

[Tomás Ó C..]

Let go of what life expects of us, and we will be free...

[...]

Ya, in my dreams I'm wild and free, but upon waking, I feel the descent. Awesome write, dear poetess

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if you tap into your inner self, the peaceful part...life will be much easier to abide, and much more fun...
there are no limits if we release ourselves.

i like the "open" sign in the pic...

[Robert]

You say a lot in this piece without many words, very good.

[KWP]

cheers again my friend - it was but a quickie X

[Adam Adams]

It makes a sense of freedom a wee bit that's hard to find. I like the word "Release". Sometimes, it makes very funny scenes in mind 'bout releasing something wild... like the heat; warmth of heart through spirit. But here, you talking of freedom which's seemed pretty interesting to read in a different way. Well pen'd!

[KWP]

release meakes the same funny scenes on my mind too --- ahhhhhhhh ;) this is more like a shedding - yes you are right X

[Adam Adams]

Lol.. you such a beautyqueen who plays even with the wilderness of thoughts very well.

[Jesse]

You have form, you have style, you'll be writing for a while. Nice!

[KWP]

into the day and into the night i will write and write with all my might ...

hehe XX thanks for reading sunshine X

[Jesse]

Hahaha! You'll huff and you'll puff and you'll bring the house down! :)

[Julia Mars]

That was pretty cool work KWP.

[KWP]

why thank you Julia Girl for stopping by XX

[Julia Mars]

'Twas my pleasure. :D xx

[Chirag Kumar]

Awesome work KWP. I could visualise myself in my mind being in the state which you have described here. :)

[KWP]

Ahhh thank you my friend and lovely to meet you X