What's Real?

My first attempt at a Cinquain - thoughts please :)

truth 

it’s there, beneath 

this mess, we made, right here 

untangle, unravel, undo the done 

for truth  

Author's Note

simple I know - but i gotta start somewhere ;)

Reviews

[sinNsincerity]

An onion that brought tears of truth to my third eye!
Not simple at all my dear.

[hardeep sabharwal]

A short but meaning full write, very nicely written

[Lluvs]

This is so beautifully simple and meaningful (:

[cycy]

i liked it.its short yet meaningful

[DirectTangent]

Very nicely done. A gorgeous write about truth and deception/disillusionment in but a few short lines. But then, in reality, truth need not be complicated, does it?I enjoyed this.

[daninstockholm]

more than a beginning! I like this,, i love the simplicity, it's all there, simple easy to find, just like truth it's self, it's always nothing more than a matter of looking. Well done!

[Valentine]

Have no idea what this type of a write requires. I never studied writing. Valentine

[andrew mitchell]

i really like this. well done kwp

[Autumn Lyric]

Simply an excellent piece of writing! and what a great place to start: with the truth. your wording is very deep despite its brevity. the message reads loud and clear...

[Inject Positivity]

Well done.....Talent=KWP.......Thumbs up!

[KWP]

oh that's very nice of you - cheers X