Kaleidoscope Eyes

Poem #1 NaPoWriMo Happy Poetry Month

A swirl, 

a swoosh, 

crimson, reds and yellow.

Whirling,

twirling, 

silhouettes in motion.

Welcome zephyr

weaves the scene,

theatre of meditation.

Placid mind - no mind

the artists come to life.

No form, yet there, 

dancing to disappear,

clears path. 

A constant 

change in motion.

A dalliance as they stay a while.

Favourable company kept.

Shine so bright  -

crimson, reds and yellows

Closed lids to the sun.

A flick of the eyes,

open wide,

curtains lift 

theatre retreats behind 

clear vision.

Soiree of amorphous 

take leave 

drowning in reality.

Shadows linger in

returning mind 

gone, not yet forgotten.

Reviews

[Island Hippy]

Brilliant , I love words you chose they are words that just sound beautiful off the tongue. Really dreamy, unforgettable writing.

[B]

Some eyes are like the waves of a stunning beach
Wonders, color and beauty
I can relate to this piece so much
And you feel like you are sitting by the sun after looking into them
A splash of life
Like this poem

Thanks for sharing

[KWP]

oh hello you!

Thanks so much for the read - glad you enjoyed. Are you participating in NaPoWriMo?

[B]

No but i will ..... looks cool !!

[KWP]

excellent - you can gain a lot from writing a poem a day - send me requests so I can see what you are upi too X

[B]

will do Thanks :)