The Un-Desire

NaPoWriMo Day 18 ... I do not desire ....

Leave your desiring at the door,

the door that is no door. 

Who is your god, your divine?

Part of your world?

You must leave him at the door.

The door that is no door. 

If you bring your divine into your world - 

you desire.

No! 

Leave your desiring at the door,

the door that is no door. 

You desire your divine?

Un-Desire. 

Attainment may be yours. 

Please close the door.

Don’t let desire in,

for if desire takes hold, 

then whatsoever you desire

will be part of your world. 

I say again - 

leave desiring at the door.
Close the door. 

Say goodbye to desiring, 

and divine will happen on you. 

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

The repetition is effective.... that god damned door.

If I had just a tiny little bit more hippy in me I'd be highly impressed with this.

Unfortunately, I only smell like a hippie. I'm really just confused and lazy in real life.

For realizes though, this was quite good. The repetition is effective.

[KWP]

This is what I mentioned to you when I said sumfin about your work - mine is a statement - statements don't belong in poetry me thinks X

[Davidgeo]

Are you calling me a hippie? That's next month.

[KWP]

perhaps ... you are in the downward spiral at least :D

[Davidgeo]

But it's such a fancy spiral with many decorations and flair.

[KWP]

and I got a big doobie and some great peace songs waiting at the bottom :)

[Davidgeo]

I like your style.

[KWP]

I like yours ;-) X yes I do X

[Davidgeo]

You just don't know any better yet. My style is cancerous, only good for certain kinds of masturbation.

[KWP]

haha - push me away go on - I am like the stone at the deep bottom of the lake - out of reach and unmovable - well until of course the lake dries and some little kid comes along and uses me as a skipping stone in the nearby river

[Davidgeo]

Whoa now, I'm not pushin'.... I never said I didn't want you to jerk me off. For an aristocratic lady and a global citizen I'm actually quite dirty in a remarkably clean way.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha KWP, ahh chocolate is all things magic, exotic, dirty and alluring :) a delicious poem...who doesn't love a bit of chocolate. Dark please. Izzy

[andrew mitchell]

haha love chocolate, what powers does chocolate have, almost more so than the spice trade.and how erotic could chocolate be, in a can whipped would be less messy lol. a lovely write

[Einstein Noodle]

"The door that is no door" and
"Close the door"
i am taking through my day today and keeping as a notices tacked to a tree upon none entering ;))) i love this ...it is so you my dear KWP
E.

[Paul Bell]

Okay i would never have thought this was about chocolate. Wish i had read that before i went to the confessional. She is so desirable though, even if she is married. Wonder if i bought her chocolates. What do you think.

[KWP]

It was about chocolate and how bloody delicious it is ... oh how I dersire it melted over ones body .... 😝

[Paul Bell]

So your suggestion is, i should give her the chocolates, but keep the blowtorch at the ready just in case. That sounds like a plan.

[KWP]

even kinkier than I first imagined ... I like t - yes!