Stillness

Daffodils dance just to dance

in the breeze on 

a sun kissed spring day

- so too can be an unfettered mind.

The universe kisses in 

breath strokes of breeze. 

Warmth comforts 

massaging sun rays 

into layers of you 

dissolving into 

empty space 

it’s all around 

filling the gaps of stillness

(no charge).

Infinite skies 

request only that we fall into them 

and be.

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

yes breathtakingly calm seeing nature at its best, a lovely poem.

[Ana B.]

I think i need glasses, cause i squeezed my eyes reading this. Very lovely, and infinitely tender :)

[Diane]

This reminds me of when I was younger. My cousin and I at my grandparents would walk up the holler and in to the woods. There was a small clearing. We would lay on the grass and just look up in to the clouds and the everything was just so relaxing. The breeze just seemed so much soothing at the time. I really liked the poem. Good job.

[wordman]

you painted a lovely image

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhhhhhhhhh the morning here is finally with temps below 80 (its barely sunrise) so after reading this poem i am decided on taking my shirt off and soaking in the sun ..and waft on the breezes .. something a very pale skinned me does not often do ;) enjoyed your poem and its experience down to me toes Elizabeth ..thanks for sharing
E.